2015年5月27日 星期三

Cellphone in my life


Nowadays, cellphones have become something necessary for most of people. I’m also one of those people. For me, I use my cellphone almost the whole day, and I find that my cellphone has become part of my life.

As the technology development, cellphones have become more convenient and more helpful than before. For example, I use my cellphone to surf the NET and watch the news every day, and it is also easy to get many information from it. What I need to do is just touch the screen some times and then I could get what I wanted. There are many convenient functions in my cellphone and I assume that I just used 50 percent of them until now. Cellphones bring many advantages to all of people and there is no doubt that cellphones have make people’s life more convenient.

However, cellphones also bring some disadvantages to us. Some studies have found that most people use their cellphones before they go to sleep and this behavior has made their quality of sleeping go down. Some scientists said that it is because that if we used our cellphones before sleeping, our brain would keep working and then we could not fall asleep right away, and we would have a low quality of sleeping. I have this behavior, too. I always use my cellphone before I go to sleep, and I find that I couldn’t sleep well and I still have clear-headed even though I have laying on the bed for a long time. It’s just because I use my cellphone before I sleep. Some studies also pointed out that the eerie blue glow from cellphones is harmful for people’s eyes. Scientists recommend that people should spend less the time on watching their cellphones or theirs eyes would get hurt. To me, I do not like to use my cellphone for a long time because it would make me feel fuzzy and uncomfortable. I even feel a little headache after using it for a long time. That was really a terrible experience to me.
In conclusion, cellphones are really helpful and convenient for me, but I still need to use it in a wise way. I should try not to use it often and less the time of using it. I think that if I use it in a right way, it would become a wonderful thing to me and enrich my life. (401)

Reflection:

I made many mistakes on the verb tense (past tense or simple present tense); I correct them on the top of the article. I also made many mistakes in writing English in a Chinese way; I should pay attention on it and make my sentences more fluent.

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