Only people earn a lot of money are successful

Only people earn a lot of money are successful?

Nowadays, there are some weird issues are talking by people. For example, only people earn a lot of money are successful? I totally assume that is something ridiculous.

I do not think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful. I admit that most of successful people earn lots of money, but it doesn’t represent that only people who are rich are successful. I assume that if you want to judge someone if he or she is successful, you mustn’t only consider if he or she is rich. I think that the feeling of successful is a subjective feeling. For example, you think that a person is successful; however, the others do not think so too.

I think the most important element of success is about dream. I assume that if someone has made his or her dreams come true, he or she is successful even though he or she is not rich. For example, Taiwan’s most unusual philanthropist, Chen Shu-chu. She woke up hardly every day, but no matter how much she earns, she spends no more than three dollars a day on herself. She takes the rest money to help other people. She even said that she hopes that she can do this forever. I think she is someone successful because she is doing what she likes and wants to do.

In conclusion, it is not only people who earn a lot of money are successful. People who are really successful are depending on if he or she has made his or her dream come true.

Reflection:

I think that I do not have a good introduction; I should make it more easily to be understood. And I should make my conclusion more powerful to make the end.

A big or a small university

When it comes to choosing a university to study abroad, in common, you usually have two choices. One is a small university, another is a big university. I prefer to big university. Here I will compare the two choices.

First, it is about the fee. There is no doubt that big university have high fee for studying there, I think that is deserved. We have to pay more if we want to get more. On the other way, a small university has the lower fee but I think that I will get fewer too. If it is in the condition that I can afford for the fee, I will choose big university with do doubt. 

Second, it is about the surroundings. Most of big universities are located in the big cities. However, most of small universities are located in the villages. I assume that I prefer to convenient life. If I lived in a big city, I can get anything easily and go anywhere easily, because a big city usually has good vital functions.

Third, it is about the courses. I deeply believe that a big university has better courses than a small university. For example, a big university usually has better teaching tools, resourcing, and the level of teachers. Most of big universities have excellent teachers and I believe that I can learn much from their professional teaching ways. Most of small universities have low level of teachers because they do not have enough money to pay for good teachers. These three important reasons are something that affects me to choose a big university.

In conclusion, I would choose a big university with no doubt and I hope that I could make it come true in the future.

Reflection:

I made some mistakes on verbs tense, and I should not to use English in Chinese way. It makes the article no fluently.

Money is everything

Writing topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Money is everything. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Your essay (374 words) starts here and please underline the topic sentences in the introduction and in the body paragraph:

I assume that most people think that money is everything; only few of people see money as useless as a shit. To me, I agree strongly that money is everything. Although it is said that’ Money can’t do everything.’ I assume that if you do not have money first, you can’t do everything. There are many reasons to support my thinking.

First, it is about your surroundings. If you have money, you can choose where you want to live. You can even hire architects to design your house. And if you have money, you can have a good way for transportation. You can choose what vehicles you want to drive today. You even can have someone to drive for you. You would not be limited. Moreover, if you have money, your friends, I mean the social circle, must similar to you. My mother always tells me that I have to make friends with someone who can give you positive energy. I mean that if your friends are not poor, they won’t become your economic burden. 

Second, it is about your entertainments. If you have money, you can go travel everywhere and you even can take your family members together. And if you have money, you can go shopping really and it is not just window shopping. You can really buy something you wanted and it’s not just thinking.

Third, if you have money, you can have more chances to stay healthy. If you were sick, you can afford the fee of hospital and you can get the good treatments. You even can demand professional medical team to treat you. Moreover, if you have money, you can get the better medicine that is good for your treatment.

In conclusion, there are many things that you can do and to have if you have money. But it’s not everything. However, I still believe that money is everything because it can satisfy me on many things. I deeply understand that if I didn’t have money, I couldn’t do many things. 

Reflection:

I do not have a good introduction at first; maybe the readers cannot understand what idea I want to tell them. And some of my supporters are not powerful to let the readers believe my ideas.